Saturday, June 15, 2013

Write with Me

Here's another shot at Haiku. Which ending do you like? Got one of your own?

Haiku with Three Endings

Clear, warm evening,
stars overhead poke the night –
the owl lifts her wings

my feet shuffle home

a train’s long whistle


Joel Brady-Power said...

Hi Pat,

Here's one I wrote a few years ago on the Fairweather Grounds.

First clatter of Kings
Mountains rising from the sea
No place else to be

And I like the owl lifts her wings, beautiful. I am very partial to owls though.

Conscious Consumer said...

I like the owl line. Ok, here's mine.

Sweat glistens with sun
The wheelbarrow grows heavy
Soil spreads, life begins